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  1. shib71

    Summer Adventure Design Contest - "The Doodle Contest"

    Regarding the conversation about the critique of @gandalf_scion's adventure: Reading Bryce's reviews helped me realise (consciously) that it was reasonable to expect a lot from adventure modules. That even WotC's published adventures could be "bad". Aside from the most explicit shortcomings...
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    Summer Adventure Design Contest - "The Doodle Contest"

    Thanks for the feedback @DangerousPuhson. I especially appreciate the notes about what was lacking - it highlighted things I need to pay more attention to when I write an adventure to share with others. At some point I'll come revisit the adventure and try and improve those parts. I want to...
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    The price of an adventure?

    I'm at the opposite end of the spectrum - I've bought far more DriveThru/DMsGuild/physical material than I'll ever use. Half of it is that I'm new to the hobby and I'm "buying" experience. The other half is that (as Bryce has shown) most adventures aren't very useful. I'm always hopeful that the...
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    Summer Adventure Design Contest - "The Doodle Contest"

    Yeah, I thought this was a good opportunity to try some of the ideas in Ultimate User-Friendliness.
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    Summer Adventure Design Contest - "The Doodle Contest"

    Ok, here it is! The art inspired me in a ... weird ... direction.
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    Summer Adventure Design Contest - "The Doodle Contest"

    Saw this thread months ago and thought it was a fun project and a good way to practice some of the ideas that have come up in Bryce's reviews, so I've been working on an adventure since. I'll post it this weekend.
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