Is it short and to the point?...yes...but it's really dry to me. Those are the type of notes I write for myself when DMing...I'm able to look at them and basically follow the example with the ghouls. I've already pictured what's going on in my mind because I prepped and just need a few notes to remind myself what's up. I think some people could look at what he did, pick it up no problem and run with it....but I'm lazy.
If I didn't create it and just reading that and trying to run it at the table, it's hit or miss for me...it's too dry. It does not spur my creative juices at all. There is some decent treasure explanations...but I would prefer the ghouls doing something...chomping on some bones or whatever. I'm totally a lazy DM though...and I dont understand his bolding sequence. I can see how it could work--and not trying to bag on it as I think its just different DM styles, but for my tastes, its too sparse if I had purchased it.